Dan, the graph was a great idea to add to your presentation. It made the story you were conveying easier to visualize and understand. I would have liked to hear more enthusiasm/ confidence in the message you were delivering.
The graph was a nice visual aid. Although you didn't use a lot of numbers, it gives your audience a better representation of how certain areas are prforming.
I am having trouble viewing the image. I think it may be my computer since others seem to have seen it. Just goes to show not all computers are the same.
I liked the thought of drawing out the chart although I agree it was a little difficult to read. Also, I didn't necessarily understand what you were plotting. I thought your pace and tone of voice were appropriate for the message you were giving. As I may have mentioned last week, I wasn't a fan of how you called out the one group as performing poorly. This may be motivating for some but also can be demotivating.
Using the graph was definitely a unique idea and it helped provide a visual appreciation of the message you were trying to get across. However, I feel there were opportunities for you to have been more enthusiastic. Very good delivery.
A liite Dan Roam, I thought it was good didn't get the scale but, I liked the effort. Delivery tone was very official as well maybe it could have been friendlier.?
I liked the graph too, but I am not sure that I connected with the lines you drew. The graph labels did not give me enough information to know what I was looking at. If you simply used the lines to illustrate performance trends, you might have tried using simple arrows. Good job!
I really like you graph! I thought it was a good idea to show where the company is headed!
ReplyDeleteDan, the graph was a great idea! It helps to speak to the differences between areas of the company.
ReplyDeleteDan, the graph was a great idea to add to your presentation. It made the story you were conveying easier to visualize and understand. I would have liked to hear more enthusiasm/ confidence in the message you were delivering.
ReplyDeleteDan, I saw the graph and thought you did an excellent job with the verbal delivery. I guess I would have also liked to have seen you in the video.
ReplyDeleteThe graph was a nice visual aid. Although you didn't use a lot of numbers, it gives your audience a better representation of how certain areas are prforming.
ReplyDeleteI agree with everyone else. The graph was nice to have a visual and the different colors made it easy to read.
ReplyDeleteGood information, I feel like you could have used more emotion or attitude in your speech to increase effect.
ReplyDeleteWell done on the visual aids but like some others, it would have been nice to hear some more enthusiasm.
ReplyDeleteI am having trouble viewing the image. I think it may be my computer since others seem to have seen it. Just goes to show not all computers are the same.
ReplyDeleteI liked the thought of drawing out the chart although I agree it was a little difficult to read. Also, I didn't necessarily understand what you were plotting. I thought your pace and tone of voice were appropriate for the message you were giving. As I may have mentioned last week, I wasn't a fan of how you called out the one group as performing poorly. This may be motivating for some but also can be demotivating.
ReplyDeleteUsing the graph was definitely a unique idea and it helped provide a visual appreciation of the message you were trying to get across. However, I feel there were opportunities for you to have been more enthusiastic. Very good delivery.
ReplyDeleteA liite Dan Roam, I thought it was good didn't get the scale but, I liked the effort. Delivery tone was very official as well maybe it could have been friendlier.?
ReplyDeleteI liked the graph too, but I am not sure that I connected with the lines you drew. The graph labels did not give me enough information to know what I was looking at. If you simply used the lines to illustrate performance trends, you might have tried using simple arrows. Good job!
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